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耕者有其田 (小奇)
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加油更新!!!!!
2008-7-10 10:57#31
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bueyking
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邪惡的父親終於向女兒下手了,可惜又僅止於下手,前文中的弟弟
在此篇中沒有登場亮相,女兒的胸部持續升級,難逃父親的玩弄,
另一方面,女兒很單純,給人一種胸大無腦的錯覺,在被父親一次
次或有意或無意的侵犯中,也沒能認清真相,真的讓人不得不大贊
一聲“夠純”,也堅定了我等肆意凌辱之的決心。

讓我最為期待的當屬女兒在舞會中的表現,希望樓主大大能夠早日
為我們帶來,謝謝你的精彩亂文!
2008-7-10 16:27#32
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讚喔!讓人想像的空間很大,而且又做好了身為姐姐的責任
以及為人女兒的義務,難怪爸爸一直要他弟弟去讀外縣市的
大學感謝大大的分享
2008-7-10 19:14#33
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hiren84
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虽然看起来很假,但却是假得真实,真实得刺激,刺激的硬了!
不过好像很久没有更新了,继续哦!




引导女友,让女友享受性爱的乐趣
2008-7-10 21:17#34
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999K
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寫的太好了啦  大大..
沒有太過辛辣的場景..
也能寫的如此生動..
寫作功力果然了得.
加油..推一個..
2008-9-10 23:40#35
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劇情描述的真清楚..讓人看了腦海中彷彿有畫面浮現^^"
2009-2-4 00:32#36
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kenarj
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很好的诱惑力,和不错的心理描写,期待接下来会发生什么……
2009-2-4 09:24#37
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allen1001
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感覺大奶對你來說是物品吧﹖這個女孩有點單純﹐又有點淫蕩﹐大大的描述也非常的詳細﹐然我們好像身在其中﹐加油哦。
2009-2-4 12:01#38
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雪飛燕
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看完這一篇糊塗帶點溫馨的亂倫文章之後...
感覺這一位漂亮的姊姊真的是神經大條但又帶一點傻傻可愛的氣息...
不論是被小弟還是老爸玩弄或者撫摸都可以以鴕鳥的心態來安慰自己悄悄的帶過...
這一篇文章感覺手法滿有獨特感又帶有一點幽默溫馨感覺...
2009-4-9 21:34#39
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弟弟電腦中那個秘密檔案中的女生,應該就是這個迷糊又淫蕩的姐姐吧?
2009-4-10 10:57#40
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Daku (UZI)
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整個系列重新看了一次之後
發現這位清純(?)的女孩兒還真不是一般的單純跟蠢XD

不過相對於父親篇的發展
個人是比較喜歡弟弟篇就是

期待第五章啊!
2009-4-10 13:51#41
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恩,小菜樣的輕淡又不失味道
希望接下來有好味的大餐
2009-4-10 14:47#42
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kennytw
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If you are searching for classical and successful adult novel with excellent and remarkably beautifl control of the Chinese lauguage, this is exactly the novel prepared for you.

The writer has said that this is a genuine true story about his life history. Nobody can challenge this trueth. Through out the whole novel, we are given very detailly indications of dates, time, months and years. Every description of every stage of the growing up of the character from baby hood to adult hood is vividly presented with very strong personal touch. And it is such a strong personal touch that makes the story looks more real and intimate. It is so real that it seems we are just like the writer, growing up from babyhood, childhood and adulthood. It seems we are experiencing the same sex life as the writer. It is a wonderful success of the writer to make the readers to mix with him in his real life story.

The topic of the novel is very poetic and it carrries a sense of sadness:
"I was not born when You were born, but while I was born you have become old - A  chapter of Incest". From this title, we immediately know the writer must have possessed a very high Chinese technique in writing. He is different from the other adult novlists who writes novels which are filled with countless sex scenes, so much so that the readers feel bored and lost their interests in reading on.

But this is not the case of this writer. The flow of ideas depiting about his babyhood to childhood is very tactfully presented that it gives a very cosy and comfortable feeling. The introduction of his aunt has successfully captured the readers moods. She is fresh, lovely and charming. She is so full of life that has occupied the heart of this young boy.

Of course our main character has all the possible qualities to be the target of the opposite sex. He is not described as a very strong muscular type man. As a matter of fact, he looks like a girl since his baby hood, partly because of his name and partly he is as lovely as a baby girl. Such a strange feminism has given the character a special feature to capture the interests of all the others , male or females. This has also make the readers a strong sense of satisfaction because they have indentified themsleves as the writer.

The extreme sexual descriptions of the love making are of the highest level of writing. There are several basic requirements needed in writing this sort of event. Most of the writers simply talk about how strong the male is, how he can handle countless females in one night, he is almighty in every espect, including possessing a big male organ. He can make love on and on again and females are nobody but their sex slaves. No, no, this is not the style of this writer.

He has a very minute description of the buidling up of sexual desire, explorations and appreciations of the wonderful sexy body of his aunt and finally comes to the horny descriptions of the love making. Such a building up of sex climax is carefully manged that the readers seem to be doing the same kind of sex acts.

The extreme descriptions of the sexual response of the male organ and the female organ have heightened the climax to the very top of the story. The readers seem to have stopped their breathing because of such successful writing.

Go to no where if you are looking for an adult novel with true genuine story because in this novel you will get more or less every thing you are interested in. You should be able to appreciate the smooth development of the story, the characterization, the setting of the story and the language used in the story.

This is a novel with high distinctions.
2009-4-10 14:48#43
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evan0211 (evan0211)
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讚  第二集的暴露蠻多的,而且還是暴露給自己的父親看,從弟弟到爸爸,最後會不會亂倫啊

這位主角姐姐,我看他在家乾脆內衣褲都不要穿了,直件套件小可愛+超短迷你裙吧!

第三集應該是爸爸趁女兒睡著,進來嘿嘿嘿......了
2009-4-11 18:08#44
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好讚的故事阿,超刺激的
2009-4-20 14:21#45
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sklee78
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hehehehhehe
2009-9-18 13:18#46
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很有感覺的文章,玩弄而不深入
2020-2-24 20:13#47
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大大謝謝
2020-3-3 20:16#48
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