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QUOTE: 原帖由 chickenwing 於 2009-1-21 10:23 AM 發表
"十個女人九個肯"系列是我近數月來比較喜歡的文章.
而其中的這一篇"我老婆唔夠秤"就是此系列我曼愛的一文!看女角Yuki被黑人,白人一起玩弄,真的很興奮,亦讓我打了不少於10次手!
一看到有& ... Chicken Wing,
Thanks for all the comment. Please forgive me for typing in English as I am on another system and does not have access to my Chinese "writing board".
In fact you are correct about feeling I was 草草收場, as in my original plan I have a section on a conversation between 建國 and 美儀 explaining to him what happened, with emphasis on how 建國 feel and change from jealous to accepting his wife's affair. However, this will be repeating a lot of content of the first few chapter, so I passed on doing it.
For the name, I like Yuki better too, but there are some reader that comment I should use all Chinese name as this is a Chinese story site, so I changed it.
This is indeed the 10th story I wrote for the 十個女人九個肯 series, but since two of them are in English and I was forbidden to post it here, this might be the last on of the series.
One very disappointing thing is there is not much feedback form readers, maybe most people here does not like my style of writing or story line?
However, thanks for the support.
Ed
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