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標題: 【翻譯】妻子在書店裡的群交 (Bookstore Gangbang)  
 
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【翻譯】妻子在書店裡的群交 (Bookstore Gangbang)

       妻子在書店裡的群交(Bookstore Gangbang)

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翻譯:pkson(爪王)
2008/03/04發表於:春滿四合院


  上星期發生了一件事,讓我和妻子在性方面的關係完全改變了。

  我的妻子凱琳今年三十歲,身高五呎三吋,頭髮是天然的棕色,擁有一雙明
亮的大眼睛。她的身材十分好,三圍是37-24-36,配合可愛的娃娃臉,
足以令任何男人心動。她是市內一間國際連鎖書店的分區經理,為了顧全身份,
她的打扮和舉止都相當保守。

  上星期五,書店裡有一個經理病倒了,所以凱琳要頂替他的工作。平常凱琳
都是五時下班的,但這天要工作到九時,直到書店打烊。

  那書店距離我們的家只有五分鐘路程,可是到了十時,凱琳仍未回到家中,
我開始有點擔心。我曾多次致電話到書店,卻也無法接通,後來我嘗試叫接線生
駁過去,才知道電話是被掛起的。我更加擔心了,於是決定去書店看看。

  我拿了凱琳放在抽屜中的書店後備鎖匙,便跳上車駛向書店。

  在書店旁的停車場,除了凱琳的車和另外兩架車外,幾乎全部車都駛走了。
我向店內望去,大部份的燈都已經關上了,只剩下店子內辦公室的燈仍然亮著。

  書店大門被鎖上了,我只好用凱琳的後備鎖匙開門,一下子就把門開了。

  一踏進內,我便隱約聽到辦公室附近有點聲音傳來,在好奇心之驅使下,我
躡手躡腳地走過去,接著便看到讓我一生最吃驚的事!我看到我可愛的妻子正躺
在辦公桌上,雙腿大大張開,她的裙被捲起束在腰間,絲襪褲被褪去丟在地上,
襯衣的鈕全被解開,地上全是散落的紙張,而電話也掉在地上。

  同時,一個赤裸上身,看來大約只有十八歲的金髮傢伙,正埋首在凱琳的雙
腿之間,努力地用舌頭向她陰戶間的裂縫裡轉,另外一個全身赤裸的青年,則把
陰莖塞進她的嘴裡。

  看見自己的妻子被侵犯,我本能地想把這兩個笨蛋拉開,狠狠地教訓他們,
但我立即發現,我的妻子並不是受害者,而是一個積極的參與者。

  我感到很震驚,呆若木雞地站在那裡,眼睛卻無法離開那下流的畫面。我的
呼吸卻越來越急速,老二也硬得像石頭一樣。天!我發現我竟然喜歡看自己的妻
子為這兩個青年服務!

  我可不想被他們發現,於是便退回黑暗處。這時我看到那金髮青年已把他的
牛仔褲和內褲褪下,急不及待地把陰莖插進我妻子濕潤的陰道。當他努力地在油
滑的肉穴出出入入時,我的妻子發出了我熟識的呻吟聲,那是快要接近高潮的叫
聲,唯一不同的是,在我熟識的小穴裡,塞住的是一根陌生的肉棒。

  黑色頭髮的傢伙爬上辦公桌,並配合那根在幹凱琳陰道的肉棒,用一致的速
度來幹她的嘴。

  我記起自己還沒有把書店的門鎖好,便安靜、快速地溜去把門鎖上。

  當我回到辦公室外探頭再望,兩根肉棒的抽插速度已不同步了,因為那個在
幹我妻子陰道的小伙子已越插越快,由他的瘋狂衝刺,我知道他快要射了。

  果然,他最後把整根陰莖一插到底,歡愉地伏在凱琳身上顫抖,並在她甜美
的體內射出了年輕的精液。

  男孩熱辣辣的精液讓凱琳身體劇烈震動,將她帶到激烈的高潮,她的胸口不
停起伏,像蛇一樣扭動身體,口中發出了淫蕩的呻吟聲。

  黑髮青年的陰莖已從凱琳的口中退出來,而金髮青年就這樣伏在我的妻子身
上,陰莖仍然埋藏在她陰道的深處,享受著高潮過後的快感,並讓陰道的蠕動把
它最後一滴精液擠乾淨。

  黑髮小子從桌上跳下來,把金髮青年推開,因為他已很心急要享用我驕妻美
妙的肉洞了。那根軟下來的陽具退出來的時候,一股濃厚的白色液體由我妻子的
陰戶中流了出來。他倆退後了一步,仔細欣賞著被那灌滿精液的淫穴。

  對我而言,看著自己的妻子那被撐開了的粉紅色陰戶,正因那年輕人的精液
和她的淫水的混合而變得閃閃發亮,那是多麼的刺激和興奮!我暗暗渴望那時有
一台攝錄機,可以讓我把整個淫亂的場面拍下來。

  兩個小子扶著凱琳,讓她從桌上下來,躺在地上,與此同時,黑髮小子幫凱
琳把身上所有衣服都脫個清光。他們讓凱琳轉身伏在地上,渾圓的臀部微微向上
挺,兩片肉唇已經貪婪地張開了,黑髮小子把身體靠上去,準備好要插進去了。

  這時我發現,那金髮的肉棒竟已像槍一樣挺立!啊……年輕和充滿精力是多
好,前後不到五分鐘,他竟然已再次硬起來。

  這好色的小色狼爬到凱琳的面前躺下來,讓她把之前性交時殘留在陽具上的
愛液和精液的混合物舔乾淨。在凱琳後面的小子突然把整根肉棒插進她的陰道,
令她不禁興奮地浪叫起來。

  她狼吞虎嚥地把金髮青年的陰莖往嘴裡送,整根塞進口中,開始狂暴地吸吮
著,我猜她是想盡快解決這根陰莖,讓自己可以專注享受小穴被幹的快感。

  不消兩分鐘,金髮青年便開始抖顫,到達了另一個高潮,在凱琳的口內射精
了。凱琳把嘴裡所有精液一滴不漏的嚥下去,當那根陰莖離開她的嘴時,所有的
殘餘物已被舔個一乾二淨。

  那金髮青年已筋疲力盡了,他頹然倒在凱琳身後的椅子上,繼續欣賞這場淫
穢的表演。

  抽插了數分鐘後,黑髮青年突然把肉棒抽出來,走到凱琳面前,把發出油光
的肉棒靠向她的嘴,原來他要像金髮青年一樣,在射精前享受一下凱琳的嘴巴。

  直到剛才一刻,我仍甘於當一個偷窺者,看著兩個青年一起享用我妻子完美
的身體,但我發現我的褲襠已撐得高高的,陽具也硬到有點不適的地部。我猶疑
了一會,最後還是決定要加入他們,一起幹我美麗的妻子。

  當凱琳仍然努力地吸吮黑髮青年的肉棒時,我已快快脫光了衣服,向那甜美
多汁的美臀步去。兩個男孩看到了我,都嚇呆了。

  我不發一言,只用動作示意他們不要作聲,同時指一指我的結婚指環,又指
一指凱琳,就算最笨的人都應該了解到那是什麼意思,但他們看來仍然感到很震
驚。幸好最後他們也理解到,我並不是要教訓他們,而是要用上我妻子剛被別人
開發過的浪穴。

  在凱琳專注地吸吮著面前的陰莖的同時,我開始用手指探進那濕得氾濫的浪
穴。她實在是太濕了,我一下子就把三根手指插了進去。

  我不斷玩弄她的小穴,直到她求我好好地幹她。由於她一直背向我,所以她
以為我是那個金髮的傢伙。

  我已不能再忍了,便扶著她的腰,調教好角度,就在她背後插了進去,令她
塞著肉棒的嘴發出了歡悅的浪叫聲,這樣的刺激令她更加賣力地為口中的肉棒服
務。

  凱琳的努力很快得到回報了,黑髮男孩全身繃緊,並在她的嘴裡射出一大股
精液。男孩閉上眼,好好享受在人家的老婆口裡射精的滿足感。

  雖然凱琳盡力地吞嚥,但仍有不少精液從口角流出來,沾滿她可愛的嘴唇和
下巴,然而,她仍用舌頭仔細地把他的肉棒舔乾淨。

  我每一下都是慢慢的、深深的插進去,享受凱琳那滑溜溜的陰道為我帶來的
特別感覺。每一次的插入,我們的性器都發出淫穢的聲音,這些聲音為我帶來強
烈的刺激,促使我加快速度,凱琳的屁股也因我的激烈抽插而不斷愉快地搖擺配
合。

  她略為轉過頭來看我,我們四目交投。她吃了一驚,因為她沒有意料到,在
操她的不是她的小姦夫,而是她的丈夫!這時,她竟到達一個強烈的高潮,我感
到她陰道的肌肉在不停收縮,在向我的陰莖擠壓。

  她一直維持這樣的姿勢看著我,臉上的表情極其淫蕩。

  我也快要到達極限了,我像發了瘋一般地狠狠抽插那濕漉漉的肉穴,全身像
被拉緊了,肉棒只管往那被陌生人徹底滋潤了的洞裡送。

  我感到自己像被囚禁了在色慾的監獄,一下子得到釋放,到達了人生中一個
最美好的高潮。

  我射了很多很多在凱琳美麗的小穴裡,那小穴不斷地擠壓我的肉棒,彷彿要
把我所有的精液都擠出來。我實在沒有這麼爽過,我幾乎看到滿天的星斗。

  當我回復理智的時候,凱琳仍然盯著我,咧著嘴笑,眼裡盡是慾望,她陰道
的肌肉仍淘氣地吸吮我埋藏在她的小穴裡那顫抖的陽具。

  在所有人都回過氣來後,凱琳向我介紹她的兩個小姦夫,金髮的是凱爾,黑
髮的叫皮特,他們都是書店的兼職員工。

  不用再說,他們已經知道我是何方神聖,兩個小伙子顯得很尷尬,胡亂地跟
我打了個招呼便立即穿上衣服,說句「再見」便溜了出去。

  他們離開以後,我那仍然全身赤裸的妻子開始告訴我事情的始末:書店打烊
以後,他們如常地進行清潔工作。

  凱琳爬上梯子,想把一些書放在上層的書架,卻不小心失足掉了下來,幸好
凱爾就在她的身邊把她接住,但在他抱住凱琳的時候,裙子卻被捲到了腰間的位
置。裙子下面除了薄薄的絲襪褲外,便什麼也沒有了,她的下體幾乎全暴露在這
年輕人的面前。

  她說凱爾呆了片刻,接著便吻她的大腿,又吻她的小穴,讓她興奮得全身抖
起來。

  很快,他頑皮的手便在她的身體上下肆意遊走,撫摸她的乳房,又向她身上
每個角落和肉縫探索。另一個男孩,皮特,不久就發現他們的好事,二話不說便
加入了。

  凱琳又說,經過大約十分鐘的熱烈接吻和愛撫後,那些男孩把她抱到辦公室
去,讓她躺在桌上,開始一起佔有她的身體,而其它的則被我全看到了。

  我一面留心聽著凱琳充滿色慾的經歷,肉棒又不自禁再次站立起來。在清理
好地方以前,我們再幹了一次,這次我維持得比較久一點,盡情享受凱琳那好色
的淫穴。

  自從這件事發生後的一星期以來,我們都像新婚夫婦一般的激情,它徹底令
我們十年的婚姻重新添上光彩。

  我們已開始計劃下一次的群交派對……啊!我已不能再等了!

               【全文完】

===================================
  這是小弟第二篇翻譯作品,有了上次的經驗,感覺這次輕鬆得多,自覺比上
次進步了不少。當然比起我的偶像馬王,我仍有很多東西要學習。

  最初我是依照原文直譯的,但譯好以後,自己重新再讀一次時,覺得太平淡
了,所以後來修飾的時候重新譯了幾句,可能與原文有點出入。另外我也加了幾
句原文沒有的,令文章看起來更色,讀起來更爽,文字感染力更強。不過這樣做
好像對原作者有點不敬,我想下次不會了。

  我沒有好的想像力,看來自己原創的色文我是暫寫不出了,我能貢獻四合院
的,我想只有翻譯了,故未來的計劃暫時都會以翻譯為主,如果各位院友有好的
英文文章,歡迎聯絡我啊!
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說起直譯和意譯來,我更喜歡后者。
太執著于原文的結構和語法,譯文好像不太能表現原作的魅力。
譯者的翻譯應該是對原文的再創作,
特別是對情色文,加上些譯者的想象會更好。
大大翻譯多了自然會有原創的想法的。
嘻嘻,期待大大的作品。
2008-3-4 19:43#2
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期待
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QUOTE:
原帖由 獨角戲 於 2008-3-4 06:43 AM 發表
說起直譯和意譯來,我更喜歡后者。
太執著于原文的結構和語法,譯文好像不太能表現原作的魅力。
譯者的翻譯應該是對原文的再創作,
特別是對情色文,加上些譯者的想象會更好。
大大翻譯多了自然會有原創的想法 ...
I agree. 意譯 make more sense and due to the fact English is not in the same  structure as Chinese, sometimes 直譯 will end up with something that does not make good sense.

Even some Chinese edition of books are translated using a mix of 直譯和意譯.

If any reader are into English sex stories, try to go to www.asstr.org
They have a very complete library of English sex stories grouped in different type (mf, MF, MMF, Orgy, rape, drunk, drug, wife swapping, gangbang, wife watching, impreg.......etc). Enjoy.

[ 本帖最後由 edchk 於 2008-3-4 09:07 編輯 ]
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感謝pkson大的辛苦發文~~
發現妻子的淫蕩一面~~
會讓人興奮~~
主角不但不阻止~~
還加入一起動作~~
得到前所未有的高潮~~
真是令人羨慕啊~~

雖然pkson大自謙沒有想像力~~
不過文章都是模仿開始的~~
期待下一篇翻譯文~~
也相信不久的將來可以看到pkson大的原創!!
加油~~
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光是翻譯這二個字...就該給大大拍手鼓鼓掌了!!

總之..色文..多一些揮灑空間..也不賴啊

最重要的..該有的肉戲..大大都沒缺歐..哈哈!!

精采...有高潮..誰說翻譯文一定要原汁原味...對了大家的味..就是好文

嘻嘻...大哥試試自己寫寫..或許有意想不到的效果呢!!
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原來是翻譯自國外的文章阿
謝謝大大的用功
四合院的會員是很有水準的




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感謝大大的翻譯文章,
看起來內容頗符合四合院風氣啊...
雖然pkson大自謙沒有想像力,
不過翻譯出來的文章卻很有畫面,
很容易就在腦中描繪出那樣的場景,
所以...說不定那一天大大翻一篇不怎麼的作品時,
說不定就決定自己來寫了呢....呵.....


另外感謝edchk大提供的網站,
有空來去看一下英文的色文,
順便練一下英文好了...
2008-3-5 09:03#8
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書店和圖書館因為是靜謐的場所
所以特別的引人遐想
在文靜的空間裡做著激烈的事情
而這篇文章裡透過丈夫的角度
看著書店職員的老婆與人性愛
甚至參予其中
這些故事情節特別令人感到興奮

最後,特別感謝這位院友的熱心翻譯
讓在太平洋一端的我們
也能欣賞到外國朋友的文章
2008-3-5 13:00#9
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翻譯也許不用太多的想像力與創作力
不過一樣需要相當多的時間與文字功力才能做到
感謝P大翻譯這篇精彩的好文
期待更多的新作喔
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翻译得很好,意译比直译难得多,能翻译到这水平已不错了,谢谢.
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色文界一件迷途小書童


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應該多與情色外文交流,以前見過一些外國色文,但就苦於外語白癡,無法搞懂他山之石!!!



妻淫,夫禍少;女姣,父心寬!
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感謝樓上各位大大的鼓勵。

事實上,翻譯並不是一件易事,
特別是對於我這種用速成一個一個字敲出來的人......
但看了大家的留言,
真的讓我有動力繼續譯下去。

意譯的確比直譯難,但出來的效果卻好多了,
所以花點心思,讓院友看得更爽,也是值得的事。

綜合院友的意見,下次的翻譯作品會嘗試以意譯為主,
在不影響故事內容的前提下,可能會加一些原文沒有的句子,
務求令大家看得過癮。

至於英文色文網站,edchk大提供的站分類很清楚,
文章數量也很多,是一個不俗的站,但以文章為主。

我比較喜歡到http://www.darkwanderer.net/
它可以說是西洋版的四合院,都是以春色為主的文章和圖片,
也值得一看。
2008-3-5 21:08#13
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翻譯=文化的橋樑

除非懂得當地語文
否則 無法接觸當地的文化

翻譯 就是將他地的文化
介紹到這裡來 讓我們見識

所以 我們很感謝譯者的辛勞........

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PKSON 謝謝你的翻譯文章
老實說  翻譯文章  要翻得好不容易
要翻到讓人看懂很容易  但要能翻到讓人勃起就也要翻譯者本身的造詣了
我覺得您做的已經很好...
但或許你執著於一定要按照原作的內容全翻
小小建議您可以在某寫橋段加入你的意見或想像空間
這樣西方文學會更貼近東方情色小說
也會更吸引讀者...
謝謝你的好文  加油
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翻译这类作品不容易,向你的劳动表示感谢,希望能看到更好的作品。
2008-3-12 21:28#16
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翻譯的嗎?不講也不知尼!感覺文中的描寫好像欠小小語言的激情!大大下回可把個人的感覺加上來豐富它阿!辛苦了!
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哪里有原文可以看看啊?
翻译的味道总是差一点
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四合院可以提供一些英文的小說給大家看看啊.四合院有沒有成立專門的翻譯小組啊.有空也加入一下,煆練一下自己的英文.
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You can say it again, difference reginal with difference language and culture, plilology between sexy and pure literature also have a discrepance.

In addition, i have been try to write sexy artical, but fail....
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原文

有院友想看本篇的原文,故在此補上
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Bookstore Gangbang (MM-teens/F, wife, voy)
by Anonymous Author


Something happened to me last week that changed the way
I look at my wife sexually.

My wife, Karen is 30 years old, about 5'3", with light
brown hair and blue eyes. She stands a firm 37-24-36
with a really cute baby face. She works as the local
regional manager for a national bookstore chain, so she
usually dresses and acts in a fairly conservative
fashion.

Last Friday she had to fill in for one of her managers
who called in sick. Normally she works from 9-5, but
since she was filling in for a retail position, she had
to close the store. The store is only 5 minutes away
from our house, so when she didn't arrive at home at
10:00 I became a little worried, because the strip mall
closed at 9:00.

I tried calling the store several times, but the phone
was always busy. After calling the operator I found out
the phone was off the hook.

Well, upon hearing this I became really worried and
decided to stop by the store to see if everything was
all right. I got my wife's spare set of keys to the
store and jumped into my car.

When I got to the mall the parking lot was pretty empty
except for my wife's car and two others. I looked
through the front window, but most of the lights were
off except for the ones in the rear office. I checked
the doors but they were locked so I started fumbling
with Karen's keys.

Fortunately it didn't take long to get in. When I got
inside I heard some muffled sounds coming from the
back. Curious, I tiptoed back and was just about to
walk into the office when I got the biggest surprise of
my life!

There was my lovely wife, lying across the desk spread-
eagle with her skirt bunched around her waist,
pantyhose on the floor, and blouse opened down to her
naval. Papers were scattered all over the floor along
with the phone.

At the same time a naked young blonde haired punk, no
older than 16 or 17, was on his knees orally ravaging
her gaping cunt. While he was doing a number on my
wife's pussy another totally naked teenage boy was
shoving his cock into Karen 's mouth.

My first reaction was to pull these two punks off her
and beat the crap out of them, but I soon realized that
my wife wasn't a victim but an active participant. As I
stood there watching in shock, my breathing grew faster
and my cock was becoming hard as a rock. Damn, I was
actually enjoying seeing my wife servicing these two
teenage boys.

Not wanting to be seen, I stepped back into the
darkness as I watched the blond haired kid take his
Levis and briefs off and slide his prick into my wife's
dripping hole. As he slid in and out of her slippery
snatch, I heard the familiar but muffled sounds of
approaching orgasm cumming my wife's lips.

The brown haired boy who was feeding Karen his cock
climbed onto the desk and began to fuck Karen's mouth
in unison with the dick pounding her cunt.

Remembering that I had forgotten to lock the front
door, I quietly snuck up to lock it - just in case.
When I got back, the boy plowing my wife's cunt was
straining to keep pace with her bucking hips.

From the sight of his quick short thrusts, I knew he
couldn't last much longer. And sure enough, with one
final lunge he shoved all the way into Karen's love
tunnel and released his youthful load as his body shook
atop her with pleasure. His hot young cum brought my
wife over, and she started to convulse in orgasm along
with him. Her breasts were heaving and she was writhing
and moaning in ecstasy.

Dark hair's cock fell out of her mouth but the Blond
boy remained in the same position with his cock buried
deep in my wife's cunt, savoring the post orgasmic
tremors as my wife's cunt milked him dry.

The dark haired boy got off the desk and nudged blondie
aside as he prepared to fuck my wife. As Blondie pulled
his softening meat out of my wife's pussy a thick glob
of white cum oozed out of it.

They stepped back for a second to admire her cum filled
twat. It was such a turn on to see her wide-open pink
cunt glistening from a mixture of her juices and the
teen's sperm. I silently wished that I had my video
camera with me.

The two kids then helped Karen off the desk and onto
the carpeted floor. As they did this, the dark haired
kid helped her remove her skirt and blouse. They
flipped my wife over onto her tummy. With her ass
arched slightly and pussy wide open, and the dark
haired boy positioned himself for easy access.

I then noticed Blondie was hard AGAIN!. Ahha, to be
young and full of spunk... He was hard again in less
than 5 minutes! The horny fucker crawled up front and
laid himself down and had my wife lick his rod clean of
their previous encounter.

The kid behind Karen thrust his cock into her snatch in
one quick motion - causing her to gasp. I guess she
wanted to finish her oral duties quickly and
concentrate on her own pleasure, because started to
deep throat Blondie and used her throat muscles to milk
his cock.

In less than two minutes Blondie was shuddering in
another orgasm, unloading his cream down her throat.
She swallowed EVERY drop. Not a bit of spunk was left
on his cock as he withdrew from her mouth.

Exhausted, the blond kid got up and collapsed onto one
of the office chairs behind them and took on the role
of a spectator.

After a few minutes of pumping Karen, Darkie, being a
"head" man, stopped ramming his tool into her,
dismounted and proceeded to get the same excellent
blowjob that Blondie just had.

Up until this point I was content being a voyeur,
however, my straining hard-on was getting really
uncomfortable. I pondered for a moment and decided to
join the fun. With Karen still sucking on dark hair's
teen-sized cock with abandon, I quietly stripped and
got behind her luscious ass.

The boys froze when they saw me. Without saying
anything I motioned for them to keep quiet and pointed
to my wedding band and back to my wife. Needless to say
they got the picture but were still in surprised. I
think they finally realized that all I wanted was a
piece of my wife's well used cunt.

As Karen continued to orally service her young stud, I
began probing her drenched pussy with my fingers. She
was so wet that I had no problem getting three fingers
in her hole. I continued to tease her until she started
begging to be fucked. All this time she had her
backside to me so she thought it was the blond kid
doing her.

I adjusted her ass for a perfect trajectory and mounted
her doggy style. This brought muffled squeals of
pleasure from her well stuffed mouth and gave her all
the more incentive to bring her oral lover off as
quickly as possible.

Her hard work quickly paid off as the dark haired kid
tensed up and started pumping a huge load into her
mouth. I watched as his eyes closed and he came in
Karen enjoying his orgasm. Karen swallowed what she
could but a lot of it spilled out over her lips and
chin. Being true to form she licked the boy clean.

All his time I was using long slow strokes on her cunt
to savor the extra smooth feeling of sloppy seconds.
Every time I stroked, our privates made obscene noises
that spurred me on. I increased my tempo, which caused
my lovely piece of ass to mew with pleasure.

She turned her head slightly and opened her eyes. Then
our eyes met. She was briefly startled, but suddenly
she started cumming and contracting around my cock. All
the while staring me right in the eye and making lewd
facial gestures.

I couldn't hold back any longer and began ramming
furiously at her hot sloppy hole. My body tensed and
all I was one big fucken cock plowing into my wife's
well lubed pussy. I felt my pent up load building and
suddenly I was having one of the best orgasms of my
life.

It seemed like I was jetting gallons of cum into her
beautiful pussy which just kept on milking me for more.
I came so hard that I literally saw stars.

As I finally came to my senses, I saw that Karen was
still staring at me with lust in her eyes and grinning
from ear to ear. I was still buried in her and she was
using her vaginal muscles to suck on my shriveling
cock.

After everyone finally caught their breath, Karen
introduced the blond as Kyle and the dark haired boy as
Pete; a couple of part-timer's who worked for the
store.

Needless to say they already knew who I was.
Embarrassed, they quickly mumbled their hellos, got
dressed and said their goodnights.

After they left, my wife who was still completely
naked, told me what had happened. It seems that, after
the store had closed, they were doing the usual
vacuuming and straighten up. She was replacing some
books on the top shelf when she lost balance on the
stepladder.

Luckily Kyle was nearby and caught her, but in the
process of doing so, he accidentally bunched her skirt
up to her waist. Since all she had on underneath were
sheer pantyhose, almost everything was exposed.

She continued to tell me that Kyle had frozen for a
moment but then he began to caress her thighs, then her
pussy which had her quivering with pleasure. Soon he
had his hands all over her body, fondling her tits and
probing all her nooks and crannies.

The other boy, Pete, had happened in on them and
quickly joined in.

Karen said that after 5 - 10 minutes of some hot and
heavy petting and kissing in the isles, the boys
carried her into the back office, set her on the desk
and proceeded to ravage her body, and I knew the rest.

Upon hearing this I was hard again. Karen and I had
another quickie in the office before we straighten up
the place and left. This time I lasted a bit longer and
really enjoyed her sloppy pussy.

That was a week ago, Karen and I have been going at it
like newlyweds since. It really has spiced up our 10-
year marriage. We have even begun planning another
group session...I can't wait!
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After compared with the original artical that I feft the translator who may involved her actual experienced and expanded the situation what she learned.
thanksso much for provided this artical.
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雖然是翻譯的文章,讀起來卻栩栩如生,一點都不生硬,真是好文
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樓主翻譯的很好,

這文章挺不錯看的,

但感覺文章短了些,

若是樓主在加些情節,

在性場面在細膩些的話,

會更加完善的。

感謝樓主的分享。
2008-3-19 00:30#24
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Well done !
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能翻義到這個程度已經不錯了,值得推薦。
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棒呆ㄋ
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说真的,我是第一次知道原来国外也有人写H小说.LZ大大翻译辛苦了.支持
2008-10-7 01:50#28
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这篇翻译的文章读起来确实感到有点生硬,也许就是没有以自己本人的角度来写的缘故吧,下次大大可以试着把自己放到主角的角度来翻译,或者直接把人称改成第一人称,也许会有不同的感受,加油!
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very good story
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